Start Selling Jars from Naruto

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1. 𝘿𝙞𝙨𝙘𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙤𝙛 𝙖 𝙨𝙞𝙩𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙍-18 𝙉𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙡: 𝙣𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙡𝙧18.𝙘𝙤𝙢

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2. ok in chapter 374, I understood. go take my 1 * and learn to write, just because white beard has to accept his destiny in the war at the top, it does not mean that he will sacrifice himself for each one of these fights, in the war at the top he had a reason to do everything, but there's no reason, I said no reason!!!!!! you just want to make another war at the top, but without real purpose, especially for a white beard, who never had ambitions to be the strongest or anything, he just wanted a family, so please please stop writing shit, if you don't understand his character

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3. Author, please have you read one piece??????? because the more I read the more I realize that you write more and more bullshit!!!! From where can they build a fort at the port in one day???? the resources, everything??? even in their base it would have taken so long to do so much preparation in one day!!! mess!!! if you said a week/10 days/a month it wouldn't have bothered me but not a maximum of 2/3 days, it takes logic even in a magical world, and you just say to yourself shit, everything makes sense

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4. I find the mc a little too stupid, he says I want money, he keeps repeating it but at the same time he is limited to konoha, while there are other villages, and even other kings, organizations that have a much higher purchasing power... either the author doesn't even realize it or he does it on purpose, in reality it's not too bad if he doesn't repeat the fact that he doesn't have enough money all the time... I would like to say that he nerfs the mc, but the latter doesn't really fight, so the nerf I don't see the point of, so here I don't understand why he is limited to someone from konoha, especially for someone who says he wants to change people's destiny, I think there are more normal people who would like his... but I find his vision much too limited. I'm at chapter 169, if the author changes and the mc sells to more people and not just limited to the anime character then I'll upgrade my rating to 4* otherwise it'll just be 1*

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5. I have to say, I haven't seen a worse seller / businessman than him, he limits himself to less than 20 people as buyers, he limits himself to a single village, and the worst he is really looking for is how to get more money...he makes stupid plans, when the easiest way to make more money and sell to more people...have to admit, I've almost reached the limit with all this plan to bullshit. the con

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6. the author favors the protagonists of each world too much, and it spoils all the fun, because the author, almost never gives a chance to unknown characters, but when it comes to protagonists or his team, he always succeeds. brief -1*

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7. Since when was Usopp so brave? especially at the beginning of their adventurer, but now the author throws all the pirates, but Usopp succeeded, it's the biggest bullshit ever, really I lose more and more pleasure to read it

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8. he says he cares about balance, helps make other people's wishes come true, but it's always the same, the strong get stronger, and the weak are very very rarely lucky, I can understand that it's a little normal, because the hard work to achieve what they have become, but there are always people who have done everything but who are just unlucky, I wanted the mc to give better luck to this kind of person, but alas, the author's vision is much too limited, otherwise it might have been better

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9. "I have been ordered by the Tianlong people to take this opportunity to use video bug images to publicize our majesty to the world." from there, I can say with conviction that the author does not really understand one piece, the 5 dean would never do something they are not sure, ever! they are ready to lose a lot just to avoid staining their image, and tossed it, without any preparation or reassurance, it's abysmal stupidity... in short, very very disappointed with this gesture on the part of the author. Another point that I don't understand, why do things so quickly, not even a month since he's been in the world and he's already done so much, it's not very convincing... Author, there's a concept to call time jump, there just the impression that it's too pre-prepared, already the movement by ship should take so much time, there we have the impression that the new world is just next door, which is completely false ... in short, he does not master all the one piece manga, but he wants to make a fanfiction...

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10. And where did such estimates come from ? This is very interesting, but there is a big problem! He perceives it as a game , and people like NPCs ! And where is the interest if he does not consider people to be people?! The idea is great, but the full implementation failed.! Why should I read about gg who does not consider people to be people ? ! Sorry

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